SHORT
STORY – FLASH FICTION TUTORIAL ASSIGNMENT
TASK:
Walk from the classroom to another section of the University, taking
note of sights, sounds, smells that we experience with the goal of
writing a short story which will twist and turn depending on events
we are given at times through the writing process.
Once
we arrived at the final area where we would write our piece, we
walked around the area further. The area was a nature area. In a
notebook, I sketched out things I saw, as well as taking photographs
for later use. These will be featured at the end of the post soon.
BLURB:
BLURB:
University
Student Chris McEwan thought his day was just like any other,
unwilling to get out of bed until the latest possible moment before
heading to his 9am class, but making it to class on time wasn't going
to be a problem when he gets there Five Hundred years early.
After
blacking out in his classroom, Chris awakens in the not so familiar
surroundings of the 1500's James Graham building, but education isn't
a high priority for the denizens Chris soon finds there as they begin
to hunt him down in a brutal game of cat and mouse.
Chris
soon discovers that he's not alone in fighting back against the robed
maniacs who are baying for his blood, turning the tide in the heavily
one-sided fight posed by resisting their attacks.
From
the secluded compound of James Graham to the horrors of the Chaos
Gate, the unlikely partnership find themselves making a final stand
against the murderous Cult of Redemption in a last ditch attempt to
escape back to their own eras and put an end to the time hopping,
apocalyptic cult before their self fulfilling prophesy can be
realised, unleashing an eternity of death and despair to all who
oppose them under the red robes, ornate masks and the death call of
the Cult of Redemption, Redemption! Redemption through fire and
through blood!
The
silent slumber was broken once more. Not by the cat seeking attention
and food, diving from windowsill to the sleeping lump under the
duvet, no, that ball of purring fluff had ran downstairs. I had heard
him bound down the wooden, carpeted staircase, probably 5 steps at a
time as usual, in that mysterious realm of half sleep. The intrusion
to the dream plane was from the phone alarm next to my pillow. The
incessant ringing jolted me to life as though using it's power source
itself surging through me.
“Thank
God for Snooze,” was all I could think.
Snooze,
however, is a double edged sword. Longer in bed, harder to get up. 10
minutes to get ready and leave the house. Morning routines were raced
through, but not overlooked. Breakfast was an “eat-on-the-move”
affair, slicing off a piece of brioche and downing a glass of water.
What I wouldn't give for a cup of tea, even with the clinically clean
taste of Sensodyne toothpaste lingering in my mouth.
The
weather, like my brain, was muggy. Leeds was cast in a muted grey,
the sky was a seemingly still, unchanging grey, the misery added to
by the slight drizzle dotting my winter jacket and phone as I loaded
up a podcast into my headphones to block out the monotonous drone of
the commuters and school-runners. The weather was deceptive, looking
cold but in actuality was pretty warm, the cloud cover sealing in the
precipitation, making the air warm and moist. I was rapidly
regretting wearing such a warm coat and a jumper...
8:30am
on the nose. Right on schedule. The voices of Stephen Brooks and Rob
Yulfo reviewing the new TMNT film starting my day with humour as I
still creep gingerly from the grips of sleep. I can feel myself
heating up insanely fast as I reach a slightly wooded area with
concrete pathway which leads up to the entrance of the university. I
was getting pretty self-conscious of how hot I was getting, feeling
as if I was about to start pouring with sweat and knowing that once I
get in the classroom and take off the coat and jumper there was going
to be a blast of heat and probably sweat that would be unbearable.
Rounding
into one of the James Graham building's corner stairways and taking
the stairs two at a time, footsteps reverberating through the tall,
empty stairwell, it never struck me as odd that I hadn't seen anyone
since I got into the University grounds, just the little ginger cat
that had made the Headingley campus it's home since I had started my
course two years ago. As I entered into the classroom, another corner
room full of dual-boot Macs (not that I ever used the Mac setting),
these were the only things in here, joining that “academic” smell
from whatever cleaning products the government had deemed standard
for all educational buildings, but seemingly more pronounced today. I
looked at my phone, 9:00am. I didn't understand what was going on.
There were usually about a dozen other Level 6 students in the room
waiting, turning their heads to see who was entering the classroom,
voices lowering as they try to register who it was. Not today,
however. I walked over to what had become my regular seat and began
to punch in my username to get on the computer system.
Then
Blackness.
I
awake with a thud. The world had walked up and punched me in the
face, then lay down beside me. I was on the blue carpeted flo- no,
wait... There is no carpet here, just bare wood. The silver covering
on the desk legs were also wood. Carved with an ornate pattern, the
smell of Oak permeating my senses. My arms felt heavy, like my veins
decided it would be fun to guide gravel around my body rather than
blood. The groggy, sleep mist in my brain was back and in a big way.
Everything I was trying to take in just wouldn't sit with me. The
computers in the room were gone, with them the dull hum of the fans.
The warm white light from the florescent lights replaced with the
dull flickering lights of candles on sconce's in the walls. The light
was enough to make out a face that stared at me from the wall. Where
the whiteboard had been affixed previously, in it's place now was the
portrait of a portly, bearded man of obvious stature. The gold and
bejewelled accessories on his clothing told me clearly this man was
of massive wealth without even having to know who he was. Middle
school history lessons came flooding back, lifting the mist in my
mind. This was the portrait of King Henry VIII. The man who famously
had his wives executed for being unable to give him a male heir. The
man who founded the Church of England so he could divorce some of his
wives.
“What
the hell is going on here?!” I exclaimed aloud to myself. But, it
would appear, not just to myself. I heard the scraping of chairs in
another room. The slamming of a door and the rush of footsteps
towards the room I was in. The door exploded inwards as I was rushed
by a robed figure wearing a metal mask. The mask was a terrifying
face, seemingly in excruciating pain, with horns curling from it's
temples. The figure, presumably a male, wore a crimson robe with
leather shoulder pads forming a type of armour for his chest and
shoulders. The trim on the bottom of the robe was adorned with a
flame motif. He brandished a blade at me. The blade was an unusual
shape, not straight edged, but more like a snake, curved in a
repeating “S” pattern. It must have been some form of ceremonial
knife. But whatever it was for, it's being pointed at my throat and
the maniac was chanting at me,
“Redemption,
Redemption, through fire and through blood!”
He
repeated this mantra as he charged forward, turning up to a blood
curdling scream rendition of his line. He was closing in on my
rapidly. He turned 15 feet to 5 in a second. I could only imagine the
fevered expression under the unchanging mask he wore, saliva foaming
in the corners of his mouth, his eyes wide and bloodshot...
I
snapped out of my shock of being charged by this maniac, dropping to
the floor and raising a foot to his groin.
“Underhanded,”
I thought to myself, “but I don't think he would extend much
courtesy to me as he was brandishing a knife at my face.”
He
sailed through the air and collided with a solid Oak table which
snapped a leg and collapsed him again into a heap on the floor. Blood
began to pool on the floor, the dark wood becoming gradually darker
of the crimson, copper smelling ooze flowed upon it. The mad man must
have landed on his own knife.
“Better
him than me,” I coldly muttered under my breath.
Leaving
the James Graham building the way I came, down the reverberating
stairwell, I heard the rush of more footsteps, sounding like bare
skin slapping the stone stairs, making it sound like an army was
pursuing me.
The
weather outside was how I remember it, the solid sheet of grey cloud
choking the landscape, refusing to betray the location of the Sun
with it's thick presence.
I
made a dash across the Acre, the large field dotted with trees, to
put as much space between me and the crazed Tudorian cultists. More
doors exploded out, this time actually being removed from their
hinges, remnants of door frames settling to the ground as I turned to
see the origin of the noise. Probably a dozen cultists dressed
similarly to the original mad man I saw in the classroom saw me
across the field and began chasing. Small knives were brandished
above their heads as they gave chase, their screams could be heard
clear as day, carried easily by the otherwise silent, still air. One
of the maniacs tore at me with a massive battleaxe hurled backwards.
The hood on his robe had fallen back, his leather armour was nowhere
to be seen and a mass of dirty ginger locks billowed behind him with
the momentum he moved at.
The
damp grass squealed under the rubber soles of my black trainers.
Sliding slightly as I rounded a tree ahead and broke off towards the
wood I could see before me. The maniacs were behind me still,
sounding like they were getting closer, but it may have just been my
mind focusing on them, drowning out anything else around me.
The
ground became a worn mud path bordered on each side by hedgerows,
badly kept and growing wild.
“Keep
to the middle!” I told myself, but too late. After dashing around a
corner, I was along the outside of the path and before I could get
back into the relative safety of the middle of the path, I was
grabbed by the arm and dragged into a bush. I began to thrash, just
looking to connect with something so I could gain a target for more
attacks. I found it. The forced exhale from my assailant as I forced
my fist into his gut was followed with a barrage of punches until I
was free from their grip.
Free
from the grip of my attacker, I prepared to salvage any weapons I
could from them, mentally kicking myself for not taking the blade
from my first attacker when I had the chance!
He
was dressed differently to the robed maniacs that I could hear
rushing past my location on the other side of the hedgerow. This man
was wearing a totally different style of dress. He wore a brown cloth
outfit, apparently some form of uniform, possibly for a militia. A
hat lay nearby, a fur hat with a tail, raccoon by the looks of it.
Next to that, a rifle with “DC” etched on the butt stock.
The
man gained purchase on the ground and raised up slightly, looking me
dead in the eyes, and in a thick Tennessee accent he introduced
himself,
“Davy
Crockett, Second Regiment Mounted Riflemen... That's quite the punch
on you, son!”
I
eyed him cautiously. I don't know much of Davy Crockett, but I'm
fairly certain he never came to Britain in a Tennessee Militia,
thirty years before he was born. I extended my hand to him, he
grasped my hand and I helped him to his feet,
“I'm
guessing since you' not killed me, you ain't one of those there
unhinged fellas!” Davy laughed, holding his gut still.
“Luckily,
no. But I guess if one person will understand my situation, it's you.
I've just got here, wherever 'HERE' is”
“Well,
you got a name, son?”
“Chris. Keep down!”
“Chris. Keep down!”
We
both crouched down, the sound of the robed crazies running our way
again clear as they slapped through the mud. Davy passed me a hunting
knife I had strapped to his leg. I grasped it and held it ready to
strike, should we be found.
He
had already took his rifle and readied it, a round charged, ready to
fire. The maniacs went straight past us again, shouting something
about clearing the garden of Chaos.
Davy
picked up,
“Garden
of Chaos..? I've heard them mention that before, a couple-a days ago.
They were preparing somethin' they called a 'Chaos Gate' in there.
Something about a portal to the future?”
It struck me there and then. The Chaos Gate had been dragging people from the future to these maniacs. But why?
It struck me there and then. The Chaos Gate had been dragging people from the future to these maniacs. But why?
“Davy,
do you know where the Garden is?”
“A
little further back here, why?”
“I've
got a feeling that's our ticket out of here.”
Davy
led me to a large wall, being careful to not betray our position to
the enemy. If we were to find out how to get back, we needed the
element of surprise. The time playing Paintball competitively had
taught me a lot for keeping as silent as possible when behind enemy
lines. Crockett himself was a famed hunter in his own time, making
our concealment a little easier. We scaled the wall and dropped to
the other side. The dead trees, blackened fallen, the stone floors
were uneven and slippery with the moisture. Beside us was a pond, the
water covered with algae. The only way to know there was water, or
some other liquid – who knows with these maniacs - was because the
algae moved slightly with the ebb and flow of whatever was beneath
it.
Cages
were stacked around randomly, most had people in them in varying
states of decay. The only thing that they had in common was that the
heads had all been removed. Visions of the massive axe carrying
cultist beheading the victims sprang to mind. I shook my head to try
and remove the horrible sight. Davy dragged me forward to the side of
a greenhouse. Our footsteps were muffled by the grass on the
stonework so we were able to get close to where we heard voices. We
had got close enough to them that we could hear clearly what was
being said,
“Malakev
will have our heads if we cannot find both of the travellers!” one
cultist said harshly to a clearly younger, smaller member in dirt
encrusted white robes.
“Can
we not just bring others from the Chaos Gate to offer up as
sacrifice?” the younger asked much to the amusement of his elder,
“And
are YOU going to offer your soul to the blood cairn to open the Chaos
Gate, Karloth?” he pointed to a large brass chalice in front of
them, “You know Malakev's wishes, that our numbers be placed
through the age of man to spread influence of his teachings and
foretell of His return to lead His flock to triumph at the time he
deems fit! We must only sacrifice those deemed unfit of life in His
world or the Gate will can only send a brother and then seal shut and
we have not the numbers to reopen it.”
We
moved ourselves to better see the area. Beside the greenhouses were
stacks of logs. They looked like funeral pyres, prepared for the
burning of their victims, if they had not just been left to decompose
slowly.
They
gathering had taken on a more members, eight of the robed maniacs
stood in front of another stone wall with a large circle through the
centre. Red Ivy hung around the top of the arch, but it was the
colour of blood, the colour of the robes of the cult. Davy adjusted
slightly, bringing his rifle level, using the pyre as a stable
platform and taking aim at one of the cultists stood above the Blood
Cairn.
“Chris,
we need to get you back to your time,” he whispered, “I'll shoot
one and once the Gate opens, you get through.”
“What
about you? You'll be stuck here!”
“When
I was taken from my time, I was about to be killed, Chris. I had a
sword coming towards me in the Alamo. I was unable to protect my
comrades and we were being executed. Here, I can protect you. I can
die with honour.”
“Davy, your story lives on forever. You DO die with honour!”
“Too late, son!”
“Davy, your story lives on forever. You DO die with honour!”
“Too late, son!”
Davy
pulled the trigger. The crack of the rifle filled the still air, the
muzzle flash almost blinding as the projectile is fired from the
barrel of the gun, towards one of the cloaked maniacs and finds it's
target easily. The blood begins to pour from the chest of the cultist
as he falls onto the giant chalice. His brothers stare at their
fallen member, the air silent, filled with the smell of burning flesh
and gunpowder.
I
hand the knife back to Davy and set off as a shock wave erupts from
the Chaos Gate forcing the cultists to go scatter with the force.
Davy charges at the foes with his knife out, slicing the air in front
of him, streams of blood and cries of pain splitting the air. He is
surrounded. Wildly slashing, hoping to make contact with anyone, to
cause as much harm as he can.
As I
dived through the portal, the last I saw of Davy Crockett was a
curved sword being thrust into his chest by what appeared to be a
Priest, who I can only assume was the Malakev they spoke of.
I
awoke back in the classroom, still empty of my classmates, but with
the familiar hum of the computer fans. As I opened my eyes, I saw the
carpet, the table legs, the whiteboard, the lights.
I
left James Graham again, everything looked how it had when I first
entered the University.
“CHRIS!”
a voice called from behind.
I
turned to see who called my name. A red robed Priest stood before me.
“So
we finally meet, Chris. Your traveller friend sends his
regards.”
Malakev had managed to fulfil his prophecy and he came after me. A vendetta that spanned 500 years. Although I never found out why I was chosen as a sacrifice, I did find out that a sword to the chest hurts. It hurts a lot, if only for a moment.
Malakev had managed to fulfil his prophecy and he came after me. A vendetta that spanned 500 years. Although I never found out why I was chosen as a sacrifice, I did find out that a sword to the chest hurts. It hurts a lot, if only for a moment.
Then
Blackness.
Impressive work! Loved the RE4 vibe...
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